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Elevator pitch #3
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Link to elevator pitch: https://youtu.be/c0fb-KINYpc
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Link to elevator pitch: https://youtu.be/c0fb-KINYpc
Reflection: Originally I really rushed my elevator pitch because I wanted it to be not too long and not too short. However, I noticed that my pitch was too fast and I just seemed like I wasn’t fully explaining the points I wanted to enhance. I also want to try harder at getting my audience engaged by using a more enthusiastic powerful voice when I speak.
What I changed:
I changed the view of the camera along with the speed and tone of my voice to get the audience more engaged and interested in my product.
Hey Jessi,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your elevator pitch number 3! You did a great job talking professionally and effectively. You knew what to say before the video started and it shows. I like how you have such a great understanding of your potential product and also how you included the competitors and how your ring would be better than what is already out there. Over-all great job!
Hi Jessi!
ReplyDeleteI think that you explained your product very well and in a confident manner. I was very impressed with how in depth you went with describing your product. It really shows how knowledgable you are about your product. The one thing I would say you could improve on is the enthusiasm in your voice and maybe adding a hook so that people can become easily interested in your product.
Jessi,
ReplyDeleteThis was a great post for your third pitch. I think that you definitely fixed the problems that you thought you had. This is a great product that can help many people in the future. I do believe that you were able to slow down your pitch so that your viewers can catch all the information and still stay interested and not feel rushed. I believe that this pitch is perfect for the amount of times we have redone it and tweaked it.
Jessi,
ReplyDeleteThis is by far your best elevator pitch! I see you really took in your reflections from past elevator pitches and also critiqued yourself individually very nicely. I like how in your reflection you talked about you noticed your timing was off, and how you rushed yourself in the first two elevator pitches. You fixed these nicely.
Hi Jessi!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your third elevator pitch and I really see the improvement. You definitely fixed the issue with timing and I think you talked at a perfect pace with a lot of inflection. I like how in depth you went on the product and I think you did an awesome job explaining it to the audience. Overall, great job on this post!